Blog #8

Currently as i stated in my last post, i am currently revising my paper thoroughly and basically rewritting it.  i had found that my TS/CD setup was not correct and didnt even think of incorporating that style into my paper so am incoporating it into it now.  My intro and my conclusion are going well.  Another thing i am working on in my paper, is my transitions.  I found that transitions was not my strongest point in my writting.  i am now having to go through and change a lot of my paper because of my lack of my writting inconsistancies.